Monday, 15 November 2010

Fleur Adcock

For a five year old

A snail is climbing up the window-sill
Into your room, after a night of rain.
You call me in to see and I explain
That it would be unkind to leave it there:
It might crawl to the floor; we must take care
That no one squashes it. You understand,
And carry it outside, with careful hand,
To eat a daffodil.

I see, then, that a kind of faith prevails:
Your gentleness is moulded still by words
From me, who have trapped mice and shot wild birds,
Your closest relatives and who purveyed
The harshest kind of truth to many another,
But that is how things are: I am your mother,
And we are kind to snails.

4 comments:

  1. A row broke out with my seventeen year old son last weekend. It resulted in him storming out of the house shouting that he hated living with me.

    It took a strong cup of tea, four chocolate digestive biscuits and this Fleur Adcock poem to call him and tell him how much I love and care for him, he replied "I'm sorry, mum"

    I guess that's why I appreciate being a mum and I understand how as mothers, we are kind to snails.

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  2. Ha!! I remember when I was a 17 ginger haired fiery tempered lad with lots of attitude. I wish I could have said sorry to my mum and told her I loved her.


    Steve

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  3. I liked this poem and understood the importance of it its a poem that makes me think about a mother and child's relationship.

    Jack

    Age 14

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  4. Aww, I remember reading this poem last year, Kerry. I love it. I'm glad it made your son say sorry, it just goes to show how poetry can make us think in a way that we didn't think we could. x

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